Emily.This is an improvement BUT take care to proof read your work. Occasionally your sentences/paragraphs don't make sense or are overly complex. This is one of the better efforts. You still need to work on your introduction and argument skills.
Emily.
ReplyDeleteThis is an improvement BUT take care to proof read your work. Occasionally your sentences/paragraphs don't make sense or are overly complex. This is one of the better efforts. You still need to work on your introduction and argument skills.