tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3918603900273771809.post1141089936318591273..comments2013-11-25T11:54:08.857-08:00Comments on Emily Woolley: Dredd essay with improvements.Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14166904140292131070noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3918603900273771809.post-22487648361867734732013-11-25T11:54:08.857-08:002013-11-25T11:54:08.857-08:00Emily.
This is an improvement BUT take care to pr...Emily.<br /><br />This is an improvement BUT take care to proof read your work. Occasionally your sentences/paragraphs don't make sense or are overly complex. This is one of the better efforts. You still need to work on your introduction and argument skills.Mr Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12759789197085658607noreply@blogger.com